Empty Platform

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The platform tiles are

cold through her thin

soles. She stands near

the yellow line, watching

the tunnel's dark mouth.

Her fingers grip the

strap of her bag,

knuckles pale. A gust of

stale air pushes against

her face, and she hears

the distant rumble of the

approaching train. She

checks her phone again—no

new messages. The screen

glows, then fades. The

rumble grows louder, a

metallic groan that fills

her chest. She steps

back an inch, then

forward, unsure. The

train screams to a halt,

doors hiss open. Crowds

surge around her,

brushing her shoulders.

She doesn't move. The

doors begin to close,

and she watches the gap

narrow. Her hand starts

to rise, then stops.

anxiety · unclear · subway · waiting · silence

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