The Five Minutes Before Home

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The engine had been off

for a while, but Daniel

didn't move. The garage

light above him buzzed -

the old one, the one

he'd meant to replace

all summer. Somewhere

upstairs, his phone lit

up with messages he'd

answer later.

Five minutes. That was

the whole ritual: five

minutes between the person

everyone needed and the

person nobody could ask.

In the car there was no

inbox, no small talk,

no version of him that

owed anyone anything.

Just the buzz of the

light and the cold

steering wheel and, once

in a while, the strange

relief of being nothing

to anyone.

Tonight the five minutes

ran long. Ten. Fifteen.

He watched a moth circle

the bulb, and for no

reason he understood, he

felt his eyes sting. Not

sadness, exactly - more

like the first time he'd

admitted the quiet was

heavy.

He almost opened the

door. Instead he sat,

and let the garage keep

his secret a little

longer.

When he finally walked

in, his daughter asked

what took him so long.

He said, "Traffic."

She believed him.

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