The 7:40 Pulls In

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He stands at the edge of

the platform, back

against a pillar,

shoulders hunched. The

air smells of grease and

damp metal. He counts

the seconds between train

announcements—too slow,

too fast. His phone

buzzes; he doesn't

look. The tracks begin

to vibrate, a deep hum

rising through his shoes.

The train's headlights

cut through the darkness

like a warning. He grips

his briefcase tighter,

the handle slick with

sweat. Doors slide open

with a pneumatic sigh. A

wave of bodies pushes

out, past him, none

meeting his eyes. He

steps inside, finds a

spot near the door,

holds the rail. The

train jerks forward, and

he sways, catching a

glimpse of his own

reflection in the black

window—tired, hollow.

His stop comes too soon,

and he steps out into

the noise of the next

station, already thinking

of the next ride back.

anxiety · quiet · subway · early_morning · departure · loneliness

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